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So I'm writing a weird MLP 40k fanfic, which I think has a novel take on the concept. Two chapters so far, 2k words, check it out.

fimfiction.net/story/462726/ol

@Celestia
Surprisingly for myself ended up reading all 6 chapters.

It makes a quite enjoyable work of tying ponies and their themes organically into Warhammer 40k #scifi universe.
It does have a lot of dialogues that could be replaced with actions, narrative devices and decisions for both 'show don't tell'' and foe deeper interaction of two lores.

@houkimenator I'm glad you enjoyed it! I don't write fight scenes and physical stuff like that as often so there's plenty of improvement to be done, but I like to say I get better every year!

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